I figured out the problem with the camera angles, so here are before-and-after comparisons between the old Carinda shuttle interior and the new Carinda shuttle interior (using the model for the Millennium Falcon's interior)...
Scene M400 (Yane treating Ryke's injuries):
Scene M403 (Yane watching the holodisc security footage of Padme giving birth to Luke and Leia):
As mentioned in last week's post, I darkened the interior a little bit to make the holodisc footage easier to see.
Scene M404a (wider shot of Yane watching the holodisc security footage of Padme giving birth to Luke and Leia):
Scene M404d (Ryke using The Force to turn off the holodisc footage):
I'll probably have to add a little more detailing and improve the texture maps in close-ups like this.
Scene M405 (Close-up of Yane talking to Ryke):
Same here -- in extreme close-ups I need to improve the texture mapping and detailing so that it looks more realistic and less CG.
Scene M406 (Close-up of Ryke talking to Yane):
Scene M408 (Ryke sitting up and talking to Yane):
Scene M410 (Close-up of Ryke talking to Yane, different camera angle):
I haven't added any of the new-and-improved scenes to the animatic, so I'll probably do that next and see how everything looks. Exciting stuff!